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Monday, January 27, 2014

Quality Words over Quantity Words: A Fallacy

In the book, Art & Fear: Observations On the Perils (and Rewards) of Artmaking, artists Ted Orland and David Waylon told about a ceramics teacher who conducted an experiment in class. They decided to grade 1/2 of the class only on the quantity of ceramics produced and 1/2 solely on the quality of their project.

The Quality group was told that if they produced a quality pot at the very beginning of the semester, then they'd get an A and wouldn't have to do anything else. The Quantity group was told that if they produced 50 lbs of pots, they'd get an A, 40 lbs, a B, and so on.

The end result?

The students in the Quantity group produced the best work, according to technical and artistic sophistication. As they kept busy, producing pot after pot, they grew adept at working with the medium, refining their process, learning from their mistakes, and producing better and better pots.

The students in the Quality group focused on planning out what they would make, producing flawless work, and only worked on a few pieces over the course of the semester. As a result, they showed little improvement.

You might already see where I'm going with this post, from the title of it.

I want to liken this process to the plotting v. pantsing debate that I discussed in last week's post here. (I know some of your plotters are gearing up to filet me alive, but hear me out.)

The above story about the ceramics teacher can be found in the book Fail Fast, Fail Often: How Losing Can Help You Win, by Ryan Babineaux, PhD., and John Krumboltz, PhD. I found this post on The Daily Beast which discusses this book in further detail, and I have to tell you, I'm on board with what they are saying.

In essence, failing quickly in order to learn fast (also called failing forward) is the chant of successful businesses, concepts, and yes, books. (Click to tweet!)

Anne Lamott, in her book Bird by Bird, said that authors need to actually write to know what they are doing. We're to expect a "shitty first draft," a better second draft, and so on. In Fail Fast, the authors use the examples of Pixar films, Starbucks, and even comedians to bring home the point that you need to fail FAST to get on to performing well.

So pantsers, who sit down, stringing words together, revising, and then creating again, are actually depicting a great concept from Fail Fast:

You can’t know what writing is like, how you will feel about it, or what will result from it until you actually are doing it.

Let's Analyze

What do you have to think about the Fail Fast, Fail Often approach to writing?

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This is very interesting, although I don't think being a plotter necessarily means you aren't putting out volume, too. And I'm not speaking as an all-out plotter. I plan a lot before I start writing, but not every detail, so I fall somewhere between the two. I guess it depends on your definition of a plotter.
I would buy this argument if plotting meant a writer sat endlessly worrying over details at the expense of writing. But plotting isn't obsessing over getting it right. It's just writing a very condensed first draft. You can think of it as going on a vacation and getting a TripTik from AAA. Just because you have the TripTik doesn't mean you're going to stick to one ridged path. It simply means you're starting with a plan. You always have the option of deviating from that agenda, taking a small side road, or going off to explore some tourist attraction mentioned in the notes in the margin.

An outline isn't set in stone. It's simply a shortcut to a first draft so the writer can figure out the potential hiccups in advance and avoid some messy detours. I see writers as being into avoidance. Either you avoid the boredom of plotting in advance, or you avoid the pain of having to cut huge chunks of your manuscript which turn out to be detours. Neither way is right or wrong. It's just a matter of what you can stomach.
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Lex Keating · 582 weeks ago

The danger to young plotters that I've seen is exactly this. They are vividly aware that bad writing exists, and so determined not to make basic mistakes, that they get caught up in studying craft instead of creating their own work. Outlines, plots, index card systems, none of these are bad, or anti-pantser. If that's a word. But to argue "I'm going to get it right out of the gate" is an impossible standard that stifles more than it encourages.

Structure, cohesiveness, and quality are excellent goals in writing, but they aren't the process of storytelling. That requires the writer to listen to the audience, to take risks with the story, to let the story grow into something it didn't know it could be. Writers can still do that using structure, but cutting the creativity out of a creative endeavor will not add to the artistry. Only the technical aspect.

And you know those East German judges want it all... :)

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