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Monday, January 20, 2014

Plotting v. Pantsing: Is One Superior Over the Other?

Lisa Cron wrote a controversial post over at Writers Unboxed last week that has given this age-old discussion a recent boost. She's the author of Wired for Story: The Writer's Guide to Using Brain Science to Hook Readers from the Very First Sentence.

Hop over there and read it. Don't forget to check out the comments, because great authors like James Scott Bell and even agent Donald Maass chimed in under the comments section.

This is obviously a subject that pushes buttons. One commenter called writing by the seat of your pants a form of "literary masturbation." No joke.

Maass made this point:
I’m not at all against writing that get us to “see” things and “apprehend” moments with arresting clarity. That’s beautiful writing. But neither can I elevate plot over process. Both approaches create something fiction needs to be great. Greatness, though, comes from a synthesis of strong story events and deft use of the vast pallet of literary technique.
James Scott Bell, author of Plot and Structure, so a proponent of some aspect of structure to "set your story free," wrote a post on The Kill Zone about the Perils of Pure Pantsing. He makes the following statement about balancing of creation within a structure:
There is an art, of course, to all this. A time to play and risk and explore. It should be done strategically, though, for the greatest benefit.
Risking and exploring, yet done strategically. I love this concept, as it's a good place for writers who eschew plotting altogether to understand what it can do for them.

What's missing from the discussion in general, in my estimation, is the allowance for personality. Yes, pantsers can shove themselves into the outlining box. It does happen. 

But at what cost? 

The love of writing, for some, is found in the process. They accept the rewriting, or as Anne Lamott said in Bird by Bird, a "really shitty first draft."

Cron's purpose in the post wasn't exactly clear to me. She says she wasn't trying to "bash pantsing" with her article, but in the same paragraph where she says that maybe plotting isn't a person's "inherent, hardwired process," (a statement I heartily approve of!) she said, "Maybe it's a bad habit you picked up along the way."

That sounds like bashing to me.

Of course, the only reason I took exception to the post is b/c I'm a semi-pantser...I just didn't see the need to leave a comment with my disgruntlement (only b/c I chose to write an entire post instead).

What made me laugh was the long-winded commenters, most of whom were proponents of some sort of creative freedom. I'm sure their personalities drove them to write what they did, and I'm sure they wrote stream of consciousness to defend their pantsing ways. And likely, they hit "Submit" and knew an extreme self-satisfaction. It's in their personalities!

Bell's post resonated with me, so check it out as well at the link provided above. He values the process as well as the structure, and believes having a little bit of both can really aid a writer.

Maass requested that Cron write a post pushing plot-driven authors "off their high hill," as she so effectively did with writers "trapped in the loop of their 'process.'"

I'll be waiting for that post.

Let's Analyze

What are your thoughts? Is it fair to elevate either into a place of superiority?

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I like the way Mr. Bell puts it...strategic art, perhaps because semi-pantser sums up my writing as well. Although I take the time before I start writing to think through the general direction and major complications, I don't go into any detail until I'm in the midst of writing where the characters take over and make their own choices. A friend, though, does some fairly detailed plotting before she writes the first word. Her process works well for her, and mine for me. I see no reason to disparage either method; to me this is simply the argument over two valid processes to get to the right answer.
1 reply · active 583 weeks ago
I totally agree. They are both valid, and disparaging one over the other seems almost juvenile. Thanks for stopping in!
I have felt the exact same thing, Rachelle! Like pantsers (of any variation) aren't as serious as plotters. But you just go...proving them wrong! :)
Hi Jeannie, I read Lisa Cron's post too. All I can say is that I will a could plot at will. I always have an overall story arc I'm working toward, but the I don't like to plan all the sub-plots - I let them come, which surprises and delights me as I write. I dedicate time to plotting with a voice recorder when I'm not near a computer, but to me that is where I add my story layers. Since my primary focus has been a 4-part urban fantasy / paranormal romance series with a lot of sub-plots and characters - it would be impossible for me to plot the entire thing outside the major arcs. On the other hand, I woke up one morning in October with an idea for a contemporary romance which I plotted in three days, and had a ready-for-press 80K MS done within eights weeks (including my critique partner & editor's passes). Beta feedback has been stunning. Could I do it again? Who knows? It's not my normal mode of operation, but I'll take it when the inspiration hits.
2 replies · active 583 weeks ago
Argh. Need coffee... I meant "I wish I could plot at will".
you know....I wonder if most plotters just think pantsers sit down with NO idea where anything is going. b/c that's just not the case. most pantsers i've talked to and worked with are just like you described. They have some idea of where they are going and where they want to end up. maybe it's just a misconception we've perpetuated somehow, unknowingly....
A pant-ser and I did a workshop last fall on this topic--how each of us worked out story. I wanted to do a demonstration using a starting point from the crowd, but we backed off. I also spend several months during the year writing a novel with a pantser. It was a good experience for me to see how that works, but I hate cleaning up and going back in to fix plot issues that wouldn't have been issues if we'd started from a more dedicated outline. The other author said she sees how things unfold as she writes. Who am I to squelch that? Our initial draft was almost a round robin-type of thing, which was interesting. But scary. Even though I try to work out most major issues before I start (what would happen if...would this work out if...why did this..., if that...) there are things that pop out to surprise me, in a good way, as I write. That's where love of process, and being flexible, meld for creativity.
1 reply · active 583 weeks ago
it's the things that pop up that i love the most. i wish that i could have those creative moments while plotting, but it just doesn't happen.
Thanks for this post. Went over to read Lisa's comments. Certainly our personalities have to factor into which we choose!
1 reply · active 583 weeks ago
definitely a personality thing. how one can't consider that baffles me! thanks for popping over, carol.
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Lex Keating · 583 weeks ago

I enjoy being a pantser, but it's not always practical for pesky things like deadlines and editors I answer to, so I've learned to be flexible. Plus, the approach of plotting allows the writer to be more analytical about what works and what doesn't. (If it's an organic, unscripted art, after all, then I don't have to deconstruct my plot and characters for glaring problems that are major turn-offs to my audience...) Though Cron's tone certainly didn't suggest anything other than very firm negative in the direction of pantsers.

There is a HUGE difference between the creative effort of making a story from scratch and the technical effort of molding that story into a viable plot that people will buy. When read, a story should feel organic. Readers generally don't want to read robotic movements from point A to point 12. That doesn't mean writers should ONLY write by their pants. Because once the story is on paper, we need to look over our work and honestly assess where it needs work. But the process of putting together the double axles and triple lutzes necessary to make a skater's short program will look different for every athlete who is making their blood-stained work look like natural grace. To tell a creative person they must know where their creativity is taking them before beginning will kill more joy and discovery than it will foster good writing.

That being said, we shouldn't baby ourselves in our efforts to build better stories...
2 replies · active 583 weeks ago
babying ourselves.....i agree. i tried to stretch myself with buying the plotting books. but i'd break out in a sweat as i tried to figure how to to meld the information i was reading with my way of processing. and i went through this time period where i felt like lesser of a writer b/c i couldn't make it fit. there are drawbacks to each way, i think, and i've accepted the drawbacks of constant editing and rewriting that come with being a pantser. it's my way of life and it works for me. :)
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Lex Keating · 583 weeks ago

You are the artist. Use what works with your muse.

I used to "pants" more than I do now, chiefly because I wrote in isolation. It was how I thought out problems. I'm braver about talking about WIPs these days, which helps with a lot of the ironing out I do with a story. Taking notes on these conversations, or compiling my "as applies to my work" notes from various writing workshops/classes, and then laying all of these out together has helped me learn to "plot" better, because it shows me shortcuts and plot holes without me having to write 50 useless pages first...

So, the quality of the writing and the storytelling both improve. I'm not going to stop "pantsing" when I write, because those surprises are why I got into writing in the first place. :)

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