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Wednesday, July 11, 2012

Attention Writers! Review and Giveaway of Amy Deardon's Story Template

I was excited to review Amy's non-fiction craft book because I've always struggled with plotting. I had picked up Save the Cat, Story, The Moral Premise and Story Engineering at about the same time, and quite honestly, you could say that Amy's book kind of puts all the good eggs from those books in one basket that was easy to read and included visuals (which was great for me, since that's my learning style).

Here's a blurb about the book from Amazon:

Writing a novel or screenplay sounds like a fabulous idea. But where do you start? And how do you finish? 

Award-winning author, Amy Deardon, answers these questions in The Story Template: Conquer Writer's Block Using the Universal Structure of Story. This approach will help you focus your creativity and complete your unique and compelling story, script, or novel. With this tool and more than 100 targeted writing exercises, you will learn to: 

* Ascertain the four foundational story pillars, and use the "secret weapon" of the story template, to structure your story.

* Build character depth with believable change. 

* Create subplots to raise tension while you deepen and contrast story themes. 

* Review writing techniques that shape your ideas into a compelling manuscript. 

The Story Template is a product of Amy's comprehensive research -- as well as her personal experience -- for what makes a story "work." No matter your level of accomplishment, this book will help you build a better story.


Amy is a scientist, and as such, she approached fiction writing from this perspective. She analyzed (I like her already) around twenty modern novels and 15 or so fairly recent films and made a list of scenes from each of them. She calculated word count and timed the scenes, did other mathematical stats (that I won't pretend to understand, but you don't have to, yay for you!) and graphed the stories out. She compared the progression of the story to determine a common pathway from all of them...and this how she created the "story template."

It's not a formula, but it described the fundamental "shape" of a story. If writers utilize it, it ensures that story elements are present and proportionally correct to the rest of the book.

Now take a second and just let yourself ponder the awesomeness of what she has done for us.


Seriously. It was a little intimidating at first, but Amy's style is easy to read, and the exercises (over 100 of them!) are very helpful in fleshing out your story idea into a viable novel. You will find concepts that are familiar to you, but Amy gives them a different term. She addresses techniques for plotting, POV, dialogue, storyboarding, editing, etc, and blends it all together. In essence, she wrote a book that plugs a needed gap in the craft literature out there....a one-stop shop, if you will.


So if you find yourself staring at your screen, not having a clue what to do next or where to go, get this book.

Amy has offered to give away a copy of this book to one lucky commenter. I like for my book giveaways to be a perk for my blog readership so if you haven't already "followed" my blog, please do so by clicking the Follow button to your right. Leave your email address in the comment so I can reach you if you win!

Let's Analyze: Has that ever happened to you? Maybe you're plugging along and then WHAM! Writer's block. Or maybe you have a great idea for a book, but can't flesh it out enough? How do you get through this?

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Don't know if you can post to Australia, but I'll comment anyway :)
This sounds like an amazing book!! It's really great when you get an idea and all, but plotting out an actual enjoyable story is another process all together!
I always have trouble writing rough drafts but making an outline makes it even harder for me. I don't know if I'd be able to use this book, but it sounds interesting. I have her fiction book A Lever Long Enough and thought it was a good read. :-)
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erin morey · 663 weeks ago

I am in the deep throes of fleshing out my first draft of my first novel. I have so many things, scenes, action and emotion I want to get in there. Frequent writers block is a HUGE problem lol.....I second guess myself. This book and "formula" would be a godsend! Win or loose, this blog is amazing and I plan on becoming a frequent flyer lol.

Love and Cupcakes,
Erin
The Story Template is now on my reading list and I will be getting it whether I win it here or not. It certainly sounds as if Amy knows her stuff, so I'll also be checking out her other works of course.
Thanks so much for this great opportunity Jeannie and Amy!
email: deanna_ms@hotmail.com
Oh, this sounds so VERY good and helpful. ANOTHER book I want! THANK you, Jeannie! Like Deanna, I'll likely pick this one up whether I win it or not.
Jeannie, thanks for such a great review! I wish I could give a copy to everyone. I found writing my first novel (A Lever Long Enough) unbelievably frustrating, and when I finished the thought of writing another novel was so wrenching that I decided to study story structure first, just for a few tips for myself. What I found was so amazing though, and I felt I had to write it up. I'm a scientist as well as writer, and couldn't believe seeing 100% agreement in my data -- this NEVER happens in the test tube. The Story Template is not a formula, but it is reliable. I liken it to the proportions an artist uses when sketching a face. Through coaching I've developed an algorithm that really works for people to develop a story, even if they don't know at first what they want to write.
What a great tool! Thanks for the opportunity, I think this will be very helpful. I've got a manuscript on the shelf that I can't finish because I'm just stuck! erica.nash@live.com
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Erica Nash · 663 weeks ago

Oops! Not sure if I commented right above!
I've had writers block on one particular novel for about 6 years. LOL It's just sitting there, waiting for inspiration. Help!! I've gotten through all my other writer's blocks and gone on to get the books published, but this particular one is the ONE I wrote as a SOTPer. It's a great story up to the point where I stopped. LOL Will NEVER do that again. Plot, plot, organize, plot. That's my mantra! :-)
I would love to have my name put in the drawiing [jmsampleataoldotcom]. I have difficulty with conflict and allowing my characters to work through it. I want to rescue. I know it's an issue..ugh. The story Template may just be the key. Thanks for the review Jeannie.
I haven't studied plotting in a while, so a book like this sounds like a great way to get my head back in the game. :) Thanks for offering the giveaway, Jeannie!
This book sounds fascinating, and definitely worth a read. (I'm a craft book junkie, though!) Thanks for spotlighting it, and for offering your copy.
Outlining is a huge help for me when I'm stuck.
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Julia Reffner · 663 weeks ago

This sounds fascinating! My favorite thing to do when I hit brain drain is spend some time enjoying life with my kiddos.
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Michelle Massaro · 663 weeks ago

I would absolutely love to win this book! I'm not a scientist, but I have some strong analytical tendencies and the idea of this approach is highly appealing! My email is michelle_massaro @ hotmail.com
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Barbara Foster · 663 weeks ago

Hi, Amy, it's your old Nangie 05 buddy, Barbara Foster. I won't be going to Philly this year, but would love a copy of your book. I know it's great. .
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barbara! you are the winner of amy's book! how funny that you know her personally! please send me your snail mail addy and i'll make sure that amy gets it. thanks!

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