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Wednesday, January 18, 2012

What Writers Can Learn From The Vampire Diaries

As most of you probably know, I have a vampire fetish of sorts. I dig them in any format: books, movies, television shows. I offered my firstborn begged and pleaded to be an extra in the Twilight series, but it was a no go. What do you think? Couldn't I totally pass for one of the Cullens...after they have been well-fed?

Don't tell me you don't think that's cool. I will let you know how to do it if you ask nicely. Anyway, moving on...

In one of the latest episodes of The Vampire Diaries (TVD), there was an incredible song featured at the end of it by Ross Copperman, called "Holding On and Letting Go." It has amazing lyrics, and I've been held captive by them all weekend. Here's the chorus:

It's everything you wanted, it's everything you don't
It's one door swinging open and one door swinging closed
Some prayers find an answer
Some prayers never know
We're holding on and letting go

Can't every breathing person relate to that? It's nothing new for me to have an emotional experience while watching this show. Yes, some of it revolves around teenage angst and drama, but most of it is truly gripping stuff that pulls your heartstrings. (TVD fans unite!) And the music is nothing short of masterful in helping accomplish this.

This little beauty of a clip (from Season 3, Episode 10) resonated with me so much (I stalked the internet to find out who sang the song), that I took some time to analyze why. I believer there's a lot to glean for romance writers in particular.



1) It throws us a bone. I think those of us on Team Damon still have a ways to wait before things really heat up with him and Elena, but our hearts just sang with this kiss! It's not their first, but it's definitely the best. Just as we're beginning to despair--possibly grow uninterested--we get this firecracker romantic moment, and now I'm chomping at the bits for continuing episodes.

2) It keeps us guessing. This wasn't the perfect ending by any stretch. He's telling her he can't have her because she's "his brother's girl, and all," even though he definitely wants her Clearly, she is shaken by the kiss. He means something to her...but just what, we're not sure. The producers sure do play their cards close to the chest. They only reveal things little by little. (see #1)

3) It's one heck of a love triangle. Not every book, movie or show has to have one, of course, but many of the great ones have this built-in tension. The fact that Stephan is Damon's brother makes this triangle all the harder to swallow.

4) It takes us by surprise. Damon's, "No. No. You know what?" moment there at the very end to return and kiss Elena (so that he has something tangible to feel guilty for) isn't what we were expecting. But dang, don't we love it.

5) The mood matches the tone and vice versa. Since writers don't get to have accompanying music, we have to work harder at getting this mix right. Pacing is key here. The fact that the music swells into the silence of their kiss is amazing production--and amazing pacing, given that the song started minutes before during other scenes. If the audience isn't caught up in this, then they don't have a pulse.

Let's analyze: What other reasons do you think shows like The Vampire Diaries and dozens of others keep viewers tuning in week after week?

There's plenty of time to take my Writer's Quiz on whether listening to music while writing affects productivity. So click on over!

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What I love about the show is that every episode (well, almost every episode) has a cliffhanger. The writers of this show are always raising the stakes. Always upping the conflict. That's what makes page-turners, too!!
1 reply · active 688 weeks ago
i'd say every episode does! they do not hold back, that's for sure.
i totally agree. thanks for stopping by. :)
Of course you would post that scene! I don't think it holds a candle to the passionate kiss at the end of season 1, where we all thought it was Elena, but it really wasn't. Now that was something!

I was all, "Noooo! You just told Stefan you loved him. But wait....I kind of like this." It was smokin!

I will admit - this last kiss was most likely ruined for me because my TV kept cutting in and out and I didn't catch what Damon was saying. When I watched it online, I had to admit, it was better when I heard the conversation. But still....not as fiery and chemistry-ladden as season 1.

I loved the chemistry b/w Elena and Damon in season two. I'm not feeling it in season three.

I have no idea what is up with amazing music and vampires. Because not only does this show have amazing music, so do all the Twilight movies.

Loved the writing tip tie-ins, here Jeannie. Graet stuff, chica.
1 reply · active 688 weeks ago
leave it to you to propagate Stephan on MY blog. have you no decency, friend?

the music is amazing. i've been listening to vampire diaries music on my iphone that i got from itunes....there is this awesome website that gives every song from every episode.... <a href="http://www.vampirediariessoundtrack.com" target="_blank">www.vampirediariessoundtrack.com. i found everything i needed from there!!
OH MY GOSH! That was soooo romantic and I don't even watch this show. But now I want to! LOL
1 reply · active 688 weeks ago
yes!! i've won you over to the dark vampire side! :)
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Cindy R. Wilson · 688 weeks ago

The lyrics of that song are awesome! Okay, I remember reading these books (the Vampire Diaries) when I was a kid, when they first came out, and I was IN LOVE with them. All my little girls friends and I passed them around and then talked about how there HAS to be a fourth one (because in the beginning it was just a trilogy) and basically we were obsessed. Anyway, so I started watching the show, and it was so different from the books that it was hard for me to watch. Strange because I did the same with the Secret Circle, but that one still has me hooked. But I digress. Your reasons why viewers tune in are right on. You've got drama, you've got romance, you've got a little bit of the forbidden and those things we all thought were magical or at least thrilling in a dark way as teens or children, and you've got a compelling storyline. The fact that whoever does music for many of the CW shows is pretty awesome doesn't hurt either. Seriously, I think I just turned into a teenager for a few minutes there :) Nice post!
I've never watched The Vampire Diaries, but clearly I need to tune in. I tune in to shows because it's relate-able or something that is missing from my own life. It's like taking a vitamin. You're deficient in something, so you find something else to replace it.
The first thing the writers have done is created characters you care about, deeply. The intensity of the plot adds tension, and therein lies a great story, for TV, Movies, or a book!

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